After reading this five paragraph article I am back to being cynical. Naina Bajekal writes a difficult (sloppy) to read article that is published on Time.com. A quick google search of the author’s name and I discover that she is a graduate of the University of Oxford with a B.S. degree in English and Modern languages and has held a variety of jobs, her current being an intern at Time Magazine’s London location.
This concerns me as the article is not impressively written. So, I decide to learn more about this writer that Time has hired; her LinkedIn account shows that she can speak four languages (English, French, Spanish, and Hindi), but then again, perhaps proper journalism isn’t the focus of a language degree? But then I see that she was actually an editor of a magazine – for seven months. I decide that the seven months was probably six to many, but that’s the magazine’s problem not mine.
I quickly realize she is not anymore a subject matter expert on Scotland than she is on journalism. She is however, representing Time. Time magazine is an authority on world events, is it not? It is certainly a familiar magazine and full of worldly articles, so I decide to google search “Is Time magazine a reputable source?” and in 41 seconds there are 158,000 responses, the entire first page of results is opinion based, so is the second, third and so on. I determine that Time is a popular periodical, not an undisputed reporting authority. I am now a more discerning reader.
So I return to researching the author and I find I may be expecting too much, this is only her second published article. Perhaps Time magazine uses their website as the testing ground for potential good writers? They should put a disclaimer on the articles; much like my checkbook has a number at the top, to indicate number of articles the author has published.
Particularly distressing to me is the number of unclear sources the author pulls information from:
“While one member of the Scottish parliament praised the vote’s ‘precious democracy’ and early participation rates,” I have to ask who? Which member?
“Concerns over rising hostility in the independence campaign led one senior pro-union Better Together source” Again, who? Which senior pro—union Better Together source?
“The official in charge of the referendum vote counting told The Guardian she had ‘no concerns’” This is getting redundant, who? What official? Why am I reading an article that references another article without citation?
“…told The Guardian” Here is this odd reference again. Is this your article or The Guardian’s article?
As convoluted and distracting as the article is, I did find the information I really wanted, “Results from the first local authorities will start rolling in at 2 a.m. local time, but the final announcement is expected between 6:30 and 7:30 local time Friday morning” Wait, which local time zone? Ugh… I assume it is Scotland's time zone and not my own local time. Either way I’m sure more experienced, credible writers in the world will be reporting on the outcome of the vote tomorrow, or so I hope.
Bajekal, N. (2014, September 18). Scotland heads to the polls to vote on independence. Retrieved from Time.com website: http://time.com/3397258/scotland-independence-vote/